At my local homeschool group’s October meeting, we divided up into grade levels with the middle school moms (6th – 8th) all meeting together. Our topic was writing, and some common trouble spots emerged as we shared our children’s situation with writing:
- weak editing skills
- not applying the writing skills they know
- lack of proofreading skills
- lack of motivation for the tough steps of editing and revising
- ultra sensitivity to mom’s criticism during the writing process
Planning the Peer Editing Session
- a draft of an expository essay that could be marked on (double spaced is preferred)
- colored pens or pencils for marking
- give a name tag to each child and parent
- have peer editing helps such as checklists and other printables listed below
- have extra colored pens
- have references available — list of transitions, dictionary, thesaurus, grammar guides
First, I reassured them that offering your paper to someone to read is a very scary and vulnerable thing. I shared some of my own recent experiences with receiving major edits to a piece of writing.
I stressed that to do peer editing well, we need to be sensitive in what we say to others but be tough skinned when it comes to receiving criticism. If we all have that attitude, the peer editing will go smoothly, and everyone will benefit.
Peer editing means sharing the positive as well as the negative. But the foundation is always to be specific. General praise or criticism is not helpful in honing writing skills. All statements must be grounded in precise examples from the paper.
Not helpfulYour paper is awesome! Loved it.Your paper needs a lot of work.
HelpfulYour descriptions of the Greek god Poseidon made me visualize him clearly.You have four run-on sentences and two fragments. I marked them here….
Structure of the Peer Editing Time
- Sit across the table from your partner.
- Read the essay without a pen in your hand. Read for meaning, and enjoy the paper.
- Pick up your pen and read the essay through again, marking notes directly onto the essay.
- Go through the checklist systematically, rereading the essay as necessary. Make notes on the checklist — yes/no, smiley face/frowny face, plus/check mark/minus — use whatever system works for you.
- Return the paper to the writer. Allow him time to look over your comments and the editing checklist.
- Discuss your praise and edits.
Peer Editing Helps
This Lesson plan at ReadWriteThink includes some very helpful guidelines:
- Peer Edit With Perfection handout –Three main steps for peer editing
- Peer Editing Guide –Outlines the roles of Responder and Writer
- (pictured)I created this to complement the materials linked above. Positive Feedback Sentence Starters - These sentence starters help peers or parent/teacher offer specific praise during editing conferences.
Peer Editing Checklists
- Time Savers for Teachers
- Complete Writing Guide includes a very thorough list of transition words (called signal words in this document), proofreader’s marks, and an editing checklist.
- (pictured) Peer Editing Checklist - A one page checklist of things to evaluate during peer (or self) editing. This one is my creation.
We scheduled two hours, and we needed every minute. Doing peer editing well does take quite a bit of time.
On the upside, the preparation work for me was minimal. All I did was print out some checklists and writing aids.
Some pairs preferred to go off by themselves to discuss the edits. Fortunately we had a large space of three rooms to work in. I don’t think that a small area would work at all.
I read each child’s essay and gave some specific feedback. Later I realized that Sprite didn’t have another adult read her essay, so next time I will request that one of the mom’s read her essay (besides me).
The children seemed to benefit from the process and from seeing the work of other middle schoolers. In the same ways, the moms felt confirmed that they were on the right track after seeing how their children’s writing compared to others.
We plan to make the peer editing co-op a monthly event.
Have any of you done a peer editing co-op? How did it go?